Well This Is My First Unity Game, I worked on it for a Really Long Time. However most of that was to learn how to use unity in the first place. please check it out and give me any suggestions, from the smallest detail to some big flaws you see that I missed.
Its a story based game, no combat, it has 3 scenes in it, shouldn’t take more then 15 minutes, and it isn’t exactly, “completed”. But I’m considering giving up the project now that I know how to use unity correctly. So based on your feedback, and please be honest, should I scratch this game and start a new one, or continue?
Questions:
Story? (To be honest I just wrote it as I was going)
Gameplay? (It’s buggy, I know, but how is it?)
Enviorment? (Too filled, not filled enough, not a noire enough setting)
etc etc. Anything else you can think of.
Thanks, I could use anyone, people new to unity such as myself, or even newer, as well as some experts.
Here is the link to a few screenshots in an album, to be honest this is about 75% of the game shown here: http://imgur.com/a/MVPZP#0
I understand, just that the file is too big to upload to dropbox, its around 100 megabites. Is there anything else I can upload too that can handle more and have its own page to play it on?
Well whatever it may be, I’m just going to leave it for download. I tried making a website on webs.com, and uploading the html file. It Didn’t work, but if anyone wants to be nice and just download and review my game. Go on ahead!!
Or don’t tell me what you think of my game. Its a free country, you can do whatever you want.
Can’t play due to it being a .app on windows. You may want to optimize your models/textures as
you’ll get more feedback with webplayer/a windows version.
This is too complicated, just anyone who has a mac and is willing to spend some time to review the game, id really appricate it if you did and told me what you think. Thanks.
Well, here’s how I did it:
1.Export the windows build.
2.Once it’s done, where you exported it should have gamename.exe and a gamename_data folder
3.Mae the .exe and _data folder a winrar archive
4.Upload for download
Just put it up online through dropbox. Tested it out on 4 computers in different locations, 2 Mac, 1 Pc, 1 Linux. This Time, It will work, as long as you have the unity webplayer plug-in.
I don’t see anything in this game that makes me think it’d be easier to start from scratch rather than fix it. There are a lot of artist problems, and some of your area transitions are a surprise. Walking up to the door teleports you in? Stairs end in a wall, but you end up on the second floor anyhow? Second floor stairs down are … weird. The Elevator on the second floor? I can clip through the wall, and walking next to it started me from the beginning again. At least, I think that was the elevator. Grey walls on the second floor have no lighting, so they blend together and you can’t tell there’s even a corner there.
I didn’t finish the game because I was pissed that it started me from the beginning with no warning. Needs checkpointing or something so you don’t have to start from scratch.
thanks for the feedback, but obviously if you didn’t finish the game it isn’t very good. I won’t start from complete scratch, I’ll keep the scripts and some of the assets. But it is my first game to be fair, anyways I’ll fix those problems and start with the next game after. Thanks again,
I dont like it when people say things like “this my first game so give me a break”. The end user doesnt care that you are new to Unity or that you are jusr learning. The quality still needs to be there. If you put up a game and ask for critism you had better to be ready to get blasted, espescially if there are errors like those listed above.
This thread should have been openned in WIP because its not a finshed game.
