Calling all artists - need some feedback on my attack effect

Hello there,
I am in need of some feedback. I’ve never be much of an artist. The stuff I draw usually come out as
chicken scratch. With that said, I’d still like to try to make something at least tolerable.
In the video below you will see my attempt at making a weapon attack with a trail.
It looks very out of place but I am not sure how to fix it.
The color looks off, the trail doesn’t feel natural, and my sword swing does not sit well with my character
as well.
Is there a systematic way artists use to pinpoint and fix issues like this?
I’d greatly appreciate some constructive feed backs. Thank you :slight_smile:

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