Comments On Intro

Unity Engine
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Hi All,

Just needed some help on the intro of the game I’m trying to finish, brains is not working lately. Download is a .mov file.

http://www.mantarayinteractive.net/downloads.html

just click on the clouds image to download file.

Animation is kinda goofy, I think.

Thanks,
Ray

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Looks like a good start to things, but I must admit I didn’t care for your use of fog. The fog affects only the building and not the water nor your skybox and so it comes off looking, well, wrong…

Before entering the gate, perhaps the camera can do a brief “look up” at the sign above the gate? Like the character gets there, stops and looks up, while looking up the gates open, then the character looks level again and enters. Something like that?

Why does the “Choose a room” menu appear twice? Once before he starts walking then again inside the gate?

The repeated “oh boy oh boy oh boy” is a little off (grates on my ears a bit), and I think I’d prefer it if the whistling was just a bit slower and more relaxed. :slight_smile:

Those are my immediate comments… Keep up the good work and of course keep us posted. :slight_smile:

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That’s a big 10-4

that menu will appear when the player enters the park and everytime the player returns from the other mini games.

It’s actually the scene after the player enters the game.
When I was recording it, did not bother to edit the recording, too lazy :slight_smile:

I agree, annoying little booger :smile: The original sound file is a lot better, not sure but I think it was jackie gleason

None is final yet, still have a lot of work todo

Thanks,
Ray

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Just be sure to keep us posted. :slight_smile:

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I see nothing.

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Sorry Jessy, the vid in question was initially posted nearly two weeks ago and it may now have been pulled down (it no longer loads for me as well).

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Sorry, I did took the video down

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I figured. I now look like this: :cry:

Please supply me with fun at your earliest convenience.

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It was just a little quicktime video jesse, not even playable. hopefully one of this days, i’ll be able to post a beta prototype version, I also tried to find the file but I think I deleted it from my HD.

Ray