Far Away - Unity 5 [Win]

Hornizon(?) - a planet,which in one time become totally collapsed! All whats left of it are Islands,on which citizens could saved their lives. The reason of it was Enakentiy! Terrible creature,which thought that his mission was to make universe clear. With help of amulet of Ignat hi could break a balance between good and evil ,but in order to do so he first must destroyed Hornizon! A few citizens of it saved,but lost their minds. On the other hand, those could who where smart could explore Islands and developed their existence by using ancient knowledges. But its not enough for being secured from Enakentiy and his lost minded creatures! For helping good guys happen to come Vova - an bundle of energy Stupiniusa,which whould help You to accomplish this task - to make peace on whats left from Hornizon.

Game create with random generating islands and asteroids.

Game has 2 craft system :

  1. Craft - Quest.
  2. The Enchant System.

Game with elements RPG and Action and with special gameplay. You must think for 2 heroes .

You have small friend and he will help in your adventure. You must upgrade his level and find items for him and for you. Without him, you can’t upgrade your level and defeat bosses.

Big World without end and all universe…

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OK - you may want to ask (beg) someone to help out on your project - translating - from your native language to English.
Reason - the description is incomprehensible, and the trailer does nothing to clear any confusion up. It’s kinda bad.

Not to be discouraging but in my opinion you are not ready for steam greenlight.
Strongly consider pulling your game from greenlight and work on it 3-4 more months until the theme and game play can be locked down into something that is understandable. Then you might consider greenlight again.

It’s a good thing you started a thread here as you will be able to get some feedback, but I must agree with theANMATOR2b, you decided to greenlight your game on steam too early. The description of the game is one of the important things that will influence the peoples opinion about your game and in your case it’s not the best. I am sure you put a lot of effort to bring the game to this stage, but at this point it is a WIP and not something that should be on steam greenlight.