feedbck on my games

Hi,

I was finally able to make a complete game in unity-- so i post my first game and second on kongregate.

but their users are killing me with their comments and rating

i know they are not the greatest games:

any feedback on how to improve them will be greatly appreciated

thank you

For the start these games are very good, you have the charachter controler, ability to shoot, get hit and pick up items which is not easy to do in the beginning. In the first game the Lose screen was badly designed, I think that you were rushing to finish the game so that you did not devote sufficient attention to that part. That is common mistake of the beginer developer. When you think that you completed the game, devote at least few hours to play the game and think what could you make better. The main reason of building that kind of games is to LEARN, so dont try to finish the game to quickly, try to constantly improve the game and with that your knowledge.
In the second gamethe only criticism is on the charachter control, the “a” and “d” keys should move player left/right.
Just keep learning and your games will get better and better.

Thank you for your feedback, I’ll take all your notes into account. I am remaking

my plan:

1- Better AI --Using waypoints

2- remaking some of the 3d models

3-adding new power ups.

4- adding a couple of new levels

5- improved title page > win , and lose screens will be redesigned

That sounds great, make shure that you put the link on the forum so that we can see your work.

I finally wa able to update on of the games

Please check it out