Hi there. So this is my first attempt at a game which has so far taken me about two months during my spare time. I’m working on this by myself, and the goal was to tell a story through linear exploration and simple graphics.
Its not finished, but I’m taking a break from it for a month or so while it collects critique. I’ve already been told the indoor and outdoor areas need to be differentiated… probably through lighting. There is at least one point in the game that wont make sense, I needed to script a battle sequence but left it out for the time being. That considered, at this point I’m most concerned about the story and setting getting across. So tell me what you think!! Don’t hold back, I thrive off criticism.
Thanks in advance for your comments :]
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/27415395/00.tar.gz
Edit: Here are some screens…




