i have a new game idea read below

i have a new game idea read below
hi my name is daniel or dkramez on the online community. i am looking for input on my idea. it says everything below. i am hoping to find some coders and other gamers to work with me on this you can reach me on my email Dkramerdan@aol.com or @gmail .com and at my kik;krisdan55 comment below thanks guys ! means a lot

The Game idea is below;

Alpha B

Hi I am Daniel, I am a 16 year old who lives near New York City. I am a true idealist, who takes his ideas and makes it a reality. In this document I will show you why my game idea, Titled Alpha B will change the industry of gaming and gamers and will actually be a game people learn from and enjoy playing. I have played hundreds of games and from there I have taken experiences and ideas and integrated it into a game, good enough to be called a video game. But surely this is not my only idea. This is my basis idea and the main idea I think should be in the game industry. A video game is a story it changes lives and gives us ideas that cannot be found in the outside world. For once the industry will have a video game made by a real gamer.

Campaign overview/idea

The year is 1943(date may vary) the Americans are about to win the war in Germany, but they have a huge problem this problem is that they do not have good pilots nor sailors. They need a group that will change the face of warfare in piloting and sailing they need a game changer, something to win the war they need Alpha B (also may vary but the group is called that, have not decided on a title) a highly trained group of 35 men, consisting of engineers, pilots, sailors, and navigators.

The Pilots/ Airmen

To start of I will introduce the pilots/airmen. There is Jim and harry who are experts in airplane mechanics, and there is Darrell and Anthony who are excellent dogfighter. These men are not like other men they each have a special trait. There is Jim who is not athletic but a genesis when it comes too fixing airplanes he is at heart a ladies man, but does not find the right one. He has his personal life and mechanic life mixed together which is a time bomb. His best friend and partner in crime harry works on planes with him, they go hand in hand, with them are two courageous young dogfighter’s high in there league, there is Darrell, only 19 years old he is a naturally borne fighter, he is a true American resides from Alabama, living on a farm. As a child he got to fly old crappy planes he took a loving to flying, in fact his father won a medal for his bravery in being one of the first dogfighters in world war 1, so the legacy continues. Darrell, has a optimistic view of the word and is always trying to do better than the rest, he pushed for the stars, while flying high in his flying beauty; Bethany. Along in the fight is co pilot and navigator, Anthony. He sits right next to his buddy Darrell every step of the fight. Anthony is known for his wits about navigation, in fact he was top in his class for geography and can name every country in the world, and is great at pinpointing targets. Between Darrell and Anthony, Anthony has the smarts while Darrell has the look, neither to say Anthony can defend him in battle. Through thick and thin Darrell and Anthony has each other’s back. Anthony resides, in Michigan he grew up in a small town near Detroit. Something interesting to add about these two fellows is that Darrell is actually African American. This time period there was no color they were brothers at heart. They fought with each other and would die for each other. The mechanics that work with Anthony and Darrel plane is Jim and harry, they are the wolf pack. And they are leading advocates in winning the war for the Americans and for the legacy of alpha B.

My idea; is to keep the group of alpha B in the series making future, generations of these people part of the group.

The Navy- sailors.

To add to Alpha B’s unit is the navy unit. This unit consists of more people than the airplane unit, it consist of 31 souls on board the USS Miami, there are groups on the ship but the ship resides under alpha B’s navy unit. This ship and its unit is unlike any ship, it is smaller than most ships that house around 150-200 men or higher this ship only holds 31. This ship is made especially for alpha B. its man purpose is to get in and out as fast as they can. There objective is to execute the task at hand. There are four big guns while there are 10 machine guns and there are 35 torpedos on board. There is a captain- flinn. A co captain- Thomason. Some of the best gunners (needless to say they are all best in there field) are Carl, Maine, and zing, Emirson, William, Donald and Sammy. They have the best aim and the best firepower and lead the rest into battle. There are three sailors at each of the four guns. One of the man guns are maintained and used by three noble sailors, there is Michel the one who fires the big one, and there is Chris who reloads the gun. And the navigator or the one who locks on target and tells Michel where to aim for is Paul. Paul like Anthony is a star in his navigation field.

Each of these people said before will paly a role in the game. There will be missions when you will have to be alpha B’s air group and there will be missions when one must be a character for alphas B’s navy unit. The main person in the pilot squad is Darrell, Darrell will be played by the gamer, he will have many interactions with Anthony and the two mechanics Jim and harry. The mechanics have a dirty mind and have an ill sense of humor but that portrays their character throughout the game. Anthony is very calm and always is nice to Darrell. Darrell is a nice hearted person but Anthony and him will fight when Darrell’s inner anger shows. The player can decide what to do in these situations the player can also choose mini missions outside of the main game to play to gain more credit to show of to there friends. These missions can range from taking out a Nazi/Japanese boat, or plane to destroyed trucks with weapons and destroying bases. The player also flies with other pilots there could be multiple planes with you in battle. There are famous battles like Normandy, and Bulge that the player can take part in. a result of Alpha B being a secret operative group, most fellow pilots other than the wolf pack wont know your in there. These themes play a role in the navy unit as well. Because of this secret group being so good they will take secret missions, some could be mini missions or main missions. This gameplay is the same for the navy group. Each person has there own personality. There personal lives will interact with here army lives. As they move across the world on different missions they will meet many people. They even meet the president. There are tragedies and there are celebrations. Once winning they celebrate. Some souls die. But

Multiplayer overall + Airplane multiplayer

The multiplayer is fun; the player can play against friends online with planes from World War 2. The player can add better engines, better guns and more people onto their planes. The bigger the plane the more things you can put on it but it costs more. You can also have dogfights with friends one on one, or you can play 5 on 5. There are multiplayers games with objectives like capture the flag, take down the plane with a tag on it like kill the carrier. This multiplayer is very similar to the navy multiplayer while the navy multiplayer will have a few more options and differ in some parts. The key to winning multiplayer games is strategy and working together as a team. You need to communicate to execute the objective and win for your team. Every time you win you get points that can be used to buy things and increase your rank. You get ranks like lieutenant and coronal when doing cool things and achieving goals. With the new technology of Xbox one and PS4 as well a new generations of PC and social networking. Players can share their games on Facebook and other social media. They can also share there tricks, as well as points. There are endless things to do in multiplayer. There is also an option of being a group on a plane with a navigator and a main pilot. There are also options for other planes like bombers to have five people on it two gunners and bomber and a co pilot and navigate and main pilot. There are various planes to choose from.

Navy multiplayer

The player has the ability to move around in characters on the ship. The player can man a machine gun or man the big guns. He/she can also be the captain in charge of giving orders as well as steering the boat. The key to success in multiplayer is to be keen of your surroundings as well as have force in the battlefield. It is undecided yet if there will be multiplayer with planes and boats, or just boats and then just planes. With the navy multiplayer, the player will have to either destroy a specific enemy ship or even fleet, or get to a location in time like capture the flag. Similar to airplane multiplayer. It seems light right now but if we have the right interface, I believe the game can push its full ability. Once completing multiplayer missions, or gaining kills or goals the player can use these point like they do with the airplane multiplayer they can buy new ships. The player can also buy these new ships and add things to it like extra guns, or even more room for more players to join your ship as a squad. The player also has the ability to increase his or hers torpedo storage. Due to the fact his is 20th century during World War 2 technology is limited but also due to alpha B’s prestige in the military they have more advanced weaponry than the regular soldier or sailor. I am hoping to make this into a France that moves around in decades, each time there is a new game the more technology weaponry and mission you have. Similar to the plane multiplayer the player has the opportunity to share his/her kills, or cool things they did during battle. There is endless thing you can do with this basis of an idea for multiplayer. There are so many modes that are opened to use as well as goals and achievements. It is really endless. As the player plays more he gains more experience. The multiplayer could change, during the making, due to study groups or beta testing.

Player’s Avatar for Multiplayer

The player can deign his/her multiplayer. They can add cool army cloths as well as there body features etc. the player will have the ability to walk around on the boat freely, not mentioning the idea of letting them carry a weapon fro defense. There is point in the game where the player’s avatar will be seen if he or she falls out of a plane. He or she will need to get to a certain point to get back into a plane, either a base or another location. At this point the avatar is needed to be un-identical to other avatars, because otherwise it would not be enjoying. This idea of a customizable avatar could be worked on with collaborators and fellow designers to make it more users friendly and a cool and easy to use interface, and tools. This part is a base idea for other things the player themselves can do in multiplayer. The player also can customize his/her boat or plane depending on what they like, they can color it put icons on it or even go insane on the deign the ideas are endless on plane and boat deigns. The avatar and overall multiplayer as well as the profile of the gamer are endless and can vary during production of game due to new ideas. As said before the player can gain points in multiplayer to use for tools and its avatar as well as level ups and weaponry.

Co-Op

The idea of co-op campaign. It comes to mine when developing a game idea to make it more social for the player/user. To make it more social and entertaining I have an idea for a co-op option for the campaign. Due to the fact there are two pilots in the plane one player can be the pilot while the other can be the navigator/co pilot. The navigator will have the ability to target enemy planes and send the info by selecting targets and sending it to the pilot. In the boat this is similar. The captain will command the ship while he can tell people to fire at a certain point or to do something to achieve the mission.

When I was thinking of the idea of making the setting world war 2 that was the first time period that came to my mind. These ideas I’ve been explaining it just the basis of what this game will be made of. We can change the date, or the era. That is not the problem. As a 16 year old and a 9 year gamer, I have played many games ranging from civilization too battlefield and call of duty. I don’t only play with skill rather I play with strategy two key topics in this game. The game I’m trying to develop in my opinion n will change the industry and give a big blow to the industry, because the idea is coming from a 16 year old gamer who has and is growing up in the gaming era. Every single day I have ideas for new games, this was just the one I think will do the best, and this is just the start. I am ambitious in ideas, but I also understand I am limited in resources, but I still push for my goal to make this game because I enjoy playing multiplayer and playing important characters in storylines. And don’t get me wrong there are many games that have great multiplayer and great stories, but not as good as this game I am imagining. This is my dream and I want to make it a reality so help me do this. Furthermore this is not just a game it is a series, it is a story. A video game is supposed to be like a book, I can put it down and I can pick it up and it can change my world, as video games has been doing for all my life. I want to make a story that cannot be put down I want to make a video game (story) about Alpha B!

Settings/events for mission
Some settings/events of World War 2 I think should be in the campaign
• Normandy (both airplane and boat)
• Battle of France (multiple) mainly airplane missions
• Battle of berlin (key! Airplane mission!)
• Battle of the bulge (mainly airplanes, taking out certain targets)
• Battle of London (secret airplane mission to help the British)
• Invasion of Germany! A lot of detail like Normandy both Boat and Airplane
• Battle of the Atlantic (ship battle)

In addition

There are going to be multiple other missions. We can change this as making the game, more interesting and more action type of battles is key. Also secret missions due to the Alpha B’s importance are key as well, we can make some up using real events tweaking it a little. But the mission ideas are endless. These battles and missions will be locations for multiplayer maps. Like over London or berlin, in Normandy, etc.

From the creator
In addition to these ideas, there are more ideas as said multiple times in this document the ideas from the basic game are endless. I am just throwing out some ideas that I think are right now good for the game. But if I collaborate with others we can turn this game from a 5/10 to a 10/10 once getting the right ideas and agreements for an amazing game. I am also interested in collaborating ideas from beta testers and focus groups to see what they would like in the game. Because the main reason I’m making this game is to not only change the game industry but as well as give opportunities to kids like me to get the game they want and what things in it. I think this is missing in the industry and it needs to be made. The new generation consoles like Xbox One and PS4 cannot live without this type of game and this overall idea of a game. It will be bad if we don’t use the consoles full power.

I truly hope you enjoyed reading this description. Please don’t see me as a 16 year old student see me as a gamer just like a 45 year old gamer, we are the same we are both gamers, and idealist, and the great ideas of today will and are coming from my generation. So help me show the world that a 16 year old can make a game that changes the game industry and is actually good…. As said before this is not my only idea, just to be heard I need to have one idea to show all of my idea, I understand some might not be liked and some will but it is the ones that are successful that take over. Working together is better than working alone and that’s why I come to you for help in making this a reality and making gamers dreams a reality.

Thank you sincerely for reading this

Yours Formally, Daniel E. Kramer.

If you’re looking for team members post in the collaboration forum.

I’d also suggest reading this thread,…
http://forum.unity3d.com/threads/197968-For-all-the-idea-guys-out-there-read-this-before-you-look-for-a-team

And remember, the idea is the easy part, it is the execution of the idea that is the real challenge.

Seems quite large for your first game. Also, are you planning on actually doing any of the actual developing (coding, art), or are you just coming up with ideas?

Also, I’m not sure you know what idealist means :slight_smile: : __Idealism - Wikipedia

“So help me show the world that a 16 year old can make a game that changes the game industry and is actually good”

If you want to create games like this i advice you to use a few years to create smaller games, then you see what it takes to get something like this done.
It will often take years, a large team and million of dollars to create top quality games.

You can start by learning some practical stuff like programming, 3D art, 2D art or whatever you prefer. Will get you a lot further.

Good luck.

For that wall of text (Did you really need 11 lines of text describing avatars?), I didn’t find any particularly inspiring or original ideas… Just a lot of vague ideas scattered amongst descriptions of the characters in your game (which is of what genre?).

As a 16 year old, I think you should concentrate on getting some useful game development skills. Build a few small games, understand how hard it is, and consider whether you still want to create your idea. Games like this dont happen overnight.

I cant code I have FEVR I have a detached retina I have ideas not saying they are the best but I think with the right people and the right collbrators like coders . Working together is better than working alone please help me

Wait, then how can you play video games?
EDIT: Or type and surf the internet for that matter?

I really hate to say this, but it’s not better if the other person can’t help.

Point well made…

Your input - a 5 minute very rough game idea which most likely doesn’t even have a comprehensive GDD.

You want - coders, artists, sound engineers, musicians to all drop what they are doing and forget about their own ideas, and work on your idea. How much % of the profits are you going to take when your game idea that is going to revolutionise the industry starts making millions?

And how can you write a huge wall of text game idea but you are not capable of coding?

I think we’re getting trolled here boys.

First off I will pay them . And I will split the money evenly between collabrators and i want to make my dream come true. I can see in my right eye right now but bad vision I will pay people!

I will pay

It took me four weeks to make that

Even on a sympathy basis, you will find zero interest in your idea if you cant contribute.

Don’t say you can pay unless you actually can.

That would imply some intelligence on the OP’s part.

I must have skimmed over that bit.

Hillarious.

If you are serious go and make some tutorials and then come back. If not, that’s a lot of work for a lame joke.

I have $20,000

I’m paying $20,000

That’s enough for a small dev team for 2 months of work. A semi-quality game of what you mentioned will take at least 1-2 years. You will need at least $150 000 or more.

I have investors lol what u think I Come with nothing on the table. I have 2 million in investors lol

ok, ill take a 20k deposit.

nothing on your cracker maybe