I'm going to publish my first game and I need feedback

Hello! I’m a beginning Unity developer!

I’m going to publish my first project. It’s a 3D shooter.

Here is a link of draft as I need feedback.

Good job on finishing your first game!
What is your goal to learn Unity?

Is it just for fun or do you want to make a career out of it?

I really think of career of a hired Unity developer or working as an indie game developer.

“Good job…”

You mean you had played it?