Just showing off would realy like some feedback

as this doesnt really pertain to unity just thought id post it here. i been learning music lately as music is important to games thought id share a remix of an old ff6 song i have been playing with. tell me what you think please.

be gentile its my first remix/song.

http://wacoopticon.webs.com/atmaBattle_DanceREMIX.mp3

I think it’s horrible but hey i’m honest.

I don’t really like the song and as you said yourself this isn’t really the place to post your music. You should find a music forum or so, you will also get better feedback there.

well thank you for your opinions i am actually reworking it. as it didnt turn out quite how i wanted it to. but just thought id see what others thought of it.

and yes i know but hey this is gossip just thought sharing was part of the gossip.

Its all a bit to high pitch. The underlying beat and the melody are both in very high frequency, which makes it hard to distinguish between the two.

If you lower the pitch of the beat, and raise its volume a bit, it wont sound so chaotic.

And yeah I would take this to a different forum for some quality feedback on music composition. And I am a bit surprised at the harsh responses in this thread, its very unlike this forum.

P.S. I don’t know what headphones/speakers you are using, but a good rule of thumb is to NOT use the expensive ones when making music. The average persons speakers don’t have a 20 - 22k FR, and something that sounds great on my sound system will sound like static on a normal set-up, which might be part of your problem.