Mobile Word Puzzle Game Take 2

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Hi there,
I am currently creating a second Mobile Word Puzzle game
Supported languages : english german
Roles : You have 8 letters, find word-combination from these, to win you have to
find x words; x stands for a calculated number between 10 and 20
for a round there a (depending at the language ) 400 - 500 words to find

Gametypes :
Basic find as much as you can, in 4 minutes
Advanced : like Basic but you just have 30 seconds for one word, if you found one, you gain extra playtime
cities, countries, rivers, plants, animals : find the category specific types,
you have 8 countable letters and 4 none countable but just 5 minutes to find 10 types

Platforms : android and maybe ios (99 dollar :frowning: is this game this worth ? )

What do you think ?
please be honest

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no hints / notion ?

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I cant really tell whats going on from the screenshots but I think you should invest in an artist anyway to try to bring up the quality of the graphics.

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its alomst done
have a look at

http://www.citrus-development.net/scripts/public/WordPebbles/WordPebbles.html

5

new version available
added score table
added random order letters
fixed some bugs

6

udapte
added new screen settings
changes game choose style
addded small usabily improvements

http://www.citrus-development.net/scripts/public/WordPebbles/WordPebbles.html

7

well … a new version is uploaded
some bugfixes are done
changed some buttons and added better sreen - choose - handling

it would be nice if you leave some comments

http://www.citrus-development.net/scripts/public/WordPebbles/WordPebbles.html

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Here’s my feedback:

  1. You shouldn’t mix languages, either write Score, Menu, New or leave it at Ergebnis, Menü, Neu
  2. Correct achivment and change your sprite text to achievement instead
  3. Typo: you have to find the SHWON number…
  4. The achievement sprite overlaps the score

The game is ok, but it certainly needs some love on the art side.
Also, some words didn’t make any sense to me (both english and german) :face_with_spiral_eyes:
Before releasing the game you should let a native english speaker review your game.

I hope you will be able to improve your game, i’m looking forward to it :slight_smile:

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oh thank you for your comment
well there is a bug, if you selected english as language ( default setting ) Ergebnis, Menü, Neu should not appear

unfortunately i am not an artist, i did my best ^^
i’ll correct the mistakes

thank you

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update

level choose :
new ui

main game :
new ui
new user input control

some new graphics

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finally … its done :smile:

have a look at :
www.citrus-development.net/scripts/public/WordPebbles/WordPebbles.html

it would be very nice if you post your impression

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Game Design is ok, and music takes me to play with it, s for first lok its ok :slight_smile:

gameplay has to be corrected some tutor stuff did not sem to work properly, and it was a differnce in handling wrong stones in Lands and Basic

i would try to stay at ne handeling so user can lern fast and use it

unitl now i like it but you need a bt betatesting it :wink:

good luck and have fun

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Hi Olivig,
thanks for you impression,

Yes right, in that version there are 3 bugs … but the tutorial should work fine … i have a look, thank you :slight_smile: