My game demands a 28 year old bald tough guy. I made 1, please share your views so that i can improve on the face
It’s very good modeling, but he has an old man face, and a young man body. 
Thanks a lot, more suggestions please
Very good body modelling, but the face is a bit more generic. I’d add some beard stubble and hair to make him look younger.
It depends a great deal on his personality and the way he carries himself. Voice etc. Going just off looks alone, sure it could work. He reminds me a of mix between that bald guy from Lost and agent 47 from Hitman.
If you want someone around 28 then to me he is looking around 55 to 60
I can see the resemblance.
Definitely needs stubble. A greater depth in the cheeks might look nice, as well as some bags under the eyes, just to give a rougher impression. I reckon a tighter vest, he looks like the kind of guy who would really try and accentuate his muscles. I think a look more like Max Payne would be better. Especially in the third one when he goes bald and crazy =]
Thanks ,
More suggestions please.
Thank you for your time.
Hmmm. Yes he looks double the age you’re aiming for. The pronounced cheekbones augment the sense that he has huge bags under his eyes which makes him look very tired and aged. His body physique looks sort of reasonable but still looks strung out like the body of a 40-50 year old who used to lift weights. It might be something to do with the shading - the lumpiness of his bones or the strange mottling of the skin around the neck and chest. And his nose is too big I think, noses and ears grow with age so it ages him. The eyes don’t look right, they look like the eyes of an older man trying to be serious. You need to make him look younger, sexier, perhaps.
Improved version
Let me know any area of improvement if needed
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yes now he is looking like a 28 year old guy …very good job
He looks good, but for some reason it feels like the neck is to long ( particularly on the frontal view)
I feel like the connection from head to body is a little wrong (I am sorry I cannot be more specific)
He is not looking 28 for me. Body-wise, perhaps, but from the neck up I’m not buying it. He still looks like he’s 40. I still think the phrenulum (above the mouth) is too developed/aged, his nose is too big, and he’s too serious looking. If his facial expression were lightend-up a bit he might not seem like the world is weight heavily. I’m not sure why you want him to be bald because balding men look a lot older than their age and I don’t see a way around that without giving him hair. Maybe his eyes are too big?
