Slender- The Big Travel is a first Person Horror Game. Its the biggest Slender Game that ever has been created! The Objective is : Collect 20 Pages and return to the Spawn to Escape.
The STORY
You heard that the legendary “Slender Man” has been sighted in the Palm Resort. Now you are going to collect all Pages to show the World, that Slender Man exits!
NOTE: AT THE MOMENT, SLENDER IS JUST A BLOCK WITH A TEXTURE! THATS BECAUSE I HAVE PROBLEMS WITH THE MODEL, WILL FIX IT SOON!
Your decision to make it commercial is base upon the fact you worked for 2 weeks on this?
I have a little advice for you on why I feel you will not make any money from this, this is purely for you benefit:
Website: It is so un-professional that anyone visiting will close the page within seconds, I mean even where you have the price it has the number 1 followed by a few symbols rather than a currency character. I would suggest spending a few $ or £’s on a real domain and some decent web hosting.
Take my advice however you wish, I am merely trying to help
2 weeks is no time at all. I would suggest you spend a few months developing and then drop a beta version out for some feedback. Once you gain some feedback you can spend another month or two polishing it up.
If it’s finished, It’s safe to assume that the note about the enderman being a block is untrue right?
If you want people to spend money on your game. Perhaps you should provide screenshots or videos of your game on the website that isn’t thumbnail sized. Most people will buy things if they have some clue as to what they will be getting. They won’t go searching around the forums for info on your game.
Present your game better, if it is a game at all, this almost ‘feels’ like a scam to get people to give you a dollar.
Right, first up “Slender”. It is not even a character, it is an image that follows from the games starting point. I am sure players would appreciate a low poly bad attempt at making a character then no attempt at all.
Next is the actual level design. The distance you have to travel to reach anything is fairly big. I would recommend bring your resort/forest closer.
Overall the game is unfinished, if you intend on being successful in this field I advise you to spend some more time on the game. I do not mean another week or two, I am talking months. Maybe you could drop a post in the collab forum and see of there is someone willing to help you.
I do not want to come across as a complete ass but I feel you need some serious help to move this forward.
Not to be a douche or anything but 2 weeks? Man, come on… Besides, Slenderman is copyrighted and all you can really do with it is use it for learning purposes…
Unless it’s on an App Store or Steam or something, no one will pay you anything. And, I’d have to agree with the others, your website is extremely unprofessional. I saw the layout and pretty much instantly left. You need to put some effort into your presentation, man!
I also have to agree with the posts before me. After reading down through I found I had to take a look at the site. Aside from poorly designed there was nothing there to really encourage me to want to download the game. There are some tiny pictures at the top and I’m not even sure they are related to the game or not. Ideally if I’m visiting your site I already have a certain motivation to try out your product, but if I’m left confused as to what exactly the product is and how it looks I’m less likely to want to even try it out.
Two weeks is really no time at all in terms of game development. It’s a great place to start, but not a good place to stop if you’re really interested in creating games. I’ve spent 6 years on my current project and didn’t make a dime from it in the first 2 years while I worked to build it up.
Keep in mind the posts here are not intended to discourage or give you a hard time, but to help you better understand the process. Keep an open mind, learn, experiment and create games because you love to do it and not because you’re looking to make money off it.
