the new trailer made for Elemental World v1.0

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I have gotten a trailer made for my game, and this is how it turned out. For their first attempt at a trailer for my game,
I think it is quite good, but it could do with a few tweaks. What do you all think?

if video dont work: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mPTLltSMwmc

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Excellent Trailer. The transitions are on key to the music which immediately grabs my attention. Only thing i could say is perhaps put in a spot for a web address in the trailer. In case its used somewhere on the web where you do not have a link around the embedded video.

Great job!

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Yeah I asked for the end of the trailer to show my web address, and maybe a bit more info.
In the youtube video description I added links to my facebook/twitter/site.

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good work.
is it for the pc, iphone or android?

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Wise, just some friendly advice. To get everyone to take you seriously, and to look more proffesional. Work on your grammar.

  1. Capatalize your I’s
  2. There are three forms of there, There, Their, They’re, each used for different things, There, is not used for everything
    3)This is not actually grammar, LEARN TO SPELL! *Maybe, *Tweaks, *Yeah, *But
  3. Your sentences are not properly formed and have words in them that do not belong
    If you are actually from England you should have a much better grasp of the language

-I have corrected all of your sentences for you :)-
1st Post: I have gotten a trailer made for my game, and this is how it turned out. For their first attempt at a trailer for my game,
I think it is quite good, but it could do with a few tweaks. What do you all think?

2nd Post: Yeah I asked for the end of the trailer to show my web address, and maybe a bit more info.
In the youtube video description I added links to my facebook/twitter/site.

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Dude, nice- but the textures on some of your terrains- especially the grassy one- are really, really tiley. You may want to make them a wee bit bigger.

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its for pc only at the moment

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Thanks I changed them now

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if it’s for the pc, you need to change the very tiled texture in the terrain.
the rest is great!

good luck