Hello, we are making our children adventure game. Actually we will be glad to read your opinion.
Game is adventure, without blood, monsters and violence.
Screens below.
screenshots looks decent and nice,i want to play a webplayer of it 
fantastic looking art, now tell me about the game itself! what are the rules, goals, and activities?
Initially, we plan make multipart ‘Internet Single Player Adventure Game’ where hero moves from one chapter to another (when they available), record player activity to database, and after chapter complete fill the response form, for the reason to develop ‘liked by user’ feature parts.
A little girl took the road ‘Tropinka’ to reach the Beautiful Castle… On she’s way, girl must make some quest, like finding letter to collect ‘main’ world, and play mini games, like puzzle and so - to activate in game usable items, like teleporter.
Before she reaches the Castle, at the last part of this chapter, main hero (girl) will be stopped by ‘log of unbelief’ and must find how to clear the path…
Some new screens below.
Ooo ruskij? Mne nravitso, gg
Great concept! The puzzles implied in the screenshots seem very interesting for that kind of game!
However, the art direction needs some love… mostly in the consistencty department. The mix of wildly different styles really looks out of place, and not in a comfortable way.
I think the environments would benefit from being drawn in the same, simpler style of the props.