Web Comic feedback please

Hi,

I’ve been inspired to make a comic book story(or more than one) which I am calling beyond earth, thought that Unity would be a great tool to do this.

I’ve made a start, see here:
http://beyondearth.webcomic.ws/comics/first/

I would love your views or feedback, bear in mind it is not finished and I still need to work on the existing frames too to give more effect, more of an alpha version.

Thanks.

I would make the pictures multiple panels so it’s not just a couple words till the panel

Thanks for your feedback, that is the plan, if you have any feedback on the comic content/art style I would appreciate very much.

To be honest it’s not a very flattering look. Most comics have vibrant colors or Dark tones to help something stand out. A more clear visual of the characters might help with the story or at least make a connection to the reader

Cool thanks, it might be made better if I can get multiple frames in one page, with black edges. The story is supposed to be a bit bland in the beginning, later it changes. Will consider that though, Thanks for the feedback.

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