Hi , My name is Nicholas I am a independent developer and have a game on indiegogo that needs your help with funding. If you want to help me fund my game please refer to this link Charity's Fate | Indiegogo
Thank you for any support and look forward in any responses.
Thanks!
Why do you put such a bland screenshot on top of your Campaign? Those models look great and after looking at your portfolio you are capable of doing cool stuff. But this is not really visible in your campaign. It’s just not exciting. It might sound harsh, but this seems kind of lazy. Finish up a area and define a look and feel. Put up some Concept art or something. Just show something cool.
Right now I don’t think you will get those 10,000 that way…
+1 to previous comment.
Also why is your goal so high if you are intending to give money back if you reach it???
I agree with this first additional post. Your models/artwork looks great! It looks like you don’t need much help from those small parts alone. But if you’re gonna ask for help on funding you have to give people a reason and not just expect money to be thrown your way. This means screens shots of what is already there and promised. Give more info and tell us why we should contribute! Have to entice and hook the people out there with some marketing!
Hope this didn’t come off sounding like an @$$. But just thought I’d give a few tips because personally imo as a long time gamer I’ve found that I spend less cash theses days on games and have less interest unless I get hooked from the idea/concept at the start.
Please read postmortems about kickstarter / indie gogo projects. Right now it seems to me that you have no idea how difficult it is to get any kind of money from crowdfunding.
You must rethink your pitch, how you display your game. No one reads a simple block of text.
You need a video showing gameplay, if you don’t have that, at least a video with you explaining to the bakers why they should give you cash.
You need lots of pictures, concept art, print screens etc showing the game.
Also, a better range of perks is needed. How big will your game be if it’s worth 25$ ?
Anyway, this is just to get you started. There are many other things to do…