Working on my game Time Traveller. Any Feedback?

[guede-91]

Hello there! as I said I am currently working on this Game, TimeTraveller

I would like to know what do you think about it and what would you improve on it so I can count on it for the releasement

Time Traveler trailer

Thanks in advance!

[digiexpertos]

Hey. It looks quite nice cause it looks like it has been drawn by hand. But the robot on top of the camel does not look very well made, it looks like it is flying LoL

[Lawsonry]

If swiping is how you interact and you can slow down the gameplay where the little dude is racing on the three-lane, my kid would play this for hours! Great work!

[BIGTIMEMASTER]

I’d suggest making the game mechanics clear from the beginning. The first thing we are told is that roads are customizable, but we don’t know yet what you are going to be doing in the game. So I would consider showing the chariot driving up front, make it clear that this is a driving/racing (however you define it) type of game, and then show off the fact that you will be doing this in lots of different era’s and environments.

Stuff like hand drawn graphics and 150 locations – save that for the end of the video after we know, “Okay, this is a game in which I can race and dodge obstacles, and I am doing this in different environments in different time periods,” and then once the viewer has seen all of this give him the rundown of all the cool things they can expect.

[guede-91]

@Lawsonry

If swiping is how you interact and you can slow down the gameplay where the little dude is racing on the three-lane, my kid would play this for hours! Great work!

Thank you very much for your support. Yeah i think it might be too difficult in some parts I will try to slow it down

Again Ty very much

[guede-91]

@BIGTIMEMASTER

I’d suggest making the game mechanics clear from the beginning. The first thing we are told is that roads are customizable, but we don’t know yet what you are going to be doing in the game. So I would consider showing the chariot driving up front, make it clear that this is a driving/racing (however you define it) type of game, and then show off the fact that you will be doing this in lots of different era’s and environments.

Stuff like hand drawn graphics and 150 locations – save that for the end of the video after we know, “Okay, this is a game in which I can race and dodge obstacles, and I am doing this in different environments in different time periods,” and then once the viewer has seen all of this give him the rundown of all the cool things they can expect.

Thank you very much for your feedback. Actually some other testers told me that before so I am making some clear tutorials in orther to teach the people how it works exactly.

Thank you very much