I have just finished the alpha for my first game , it’s a survival horror, anyone who’s interested in playing it any feedback is greatly appreciated this is the download link http://adf.ly/XTczP (constructive criticism please , i worked hard on this and it’s my first game) Also anyone who makes YouTube videos, making a play through of this would really help thanks =3.
I highly recommend you play in 1980 by 1080 so you can easily see the battery life GUI
" You are a world famous religious doctor. You believe God can save all our souls from the evil of hell…
After hearing rumours of an abandoned town, that has been haunted by the death of a small girl that was tortured in the town’s asylum, you decide to investigate"
couple of images didn’t want to show much and spoil anything! =D
So long as I get respectable feedback from this , I intend on making another couple of chapters to conclude the story for the beta.
EDIT Massive texture improvements are being added and bug fixes
Hey mate. Sorry but nobody is going to click on a random link for a download we know nothing about. Not meaning to be rude or anything, but perhaps you should post some screenshots? Maybe a gameplay video? A list detailing what the game is about or what you plan to have for it
Yeah that looks pretty good mate! One thing I might suggest looking at the lighting of the first screenshot, is perhaps toning down the brightness a bit. I mean, it kind of just looks a bit like any old village Doesn’t really have that, “abandoned” feel if you know what I mean?
I don’t understand what was there to play exactly. Besides walking and switching the flashlight was there something else ?
The level design is … well, hard to say. Houses in mid air, waterfalls coming from nowhere no point talking about textures, lighting and other things.
If that was all, you can’t really call it playing as there are showcases for stuff on asset store that are more complex.
Not meaning to be rude or anything, but you are maybe the tenth person, only this week, that makes the same horror game “dark and flashlight” with similar (if not the same) ambient sound.
I see no problem in repeating myself.
What you did there takes around 2 hours, at most.
From your notepad :
Download. - Done Make Playthoughs. - Impossible, as there is nothing really to play. As I said, walking around is not playing. It is called showcasing. Unity gives you by default all the tools to achieve this in minutes. Give it a rating. - N/A Alert me of any bugs and or things you think should be added / changed. - I gave you the bugs… which were graphic related, which as you said they will be changed anyway Sharing the game with your friends. - I will, when it will be one. Donating via paypal. - for a showcase? Money don’t come easy, but keep working on the game and you will find soon enough.
Am I annoyed ? Yes I am, because there are hundreds of posts monthly. Most of them are only ideas other are nothing than a simple showcase, like yours, very few are actually worth looking into.
You understand that if thousands of people that have unity will each post their ‘game’ this forum would be an even bigger mess than it is now? No one would even have time to see your post…
Maybe there project entries on these forums should have a minimum level of development before being accepted for feedback in the community.
Just saying that this is my first game , it’s in alpha, it’s in work in progress. Thanks for alerting the bugs I didn’t realise one house was above the ground on the left half thanks for that. But honestly before this I didn’t know anything about javascript… also I don’t understand how it’s a show case… it’s not like it took me 5 minuets and it’s not like there isn’t an objective???
That is what I asked. What is the objective ? How do I achieve it? Is there something to do than passing the long tunnel ?
I saw lots of notes hanged on the well and houses, etc, are they of any use ?
Okay so after you pass down the tunnel ? The issue (something i know i need to fix so … yeah ) is there is stair at the end of the tunnel for which i need to change the colliders as you need to jump up them once you get up there, walk forward turn right , then go wild… At least one thing i’ve definitely learned is to make this more clear so thank you for that… Also I know the textures aren’t wonderful this is something that I need to work on but as it’s my first game it’s a lot of learning experience…
this is the download link http://adf.ly/XTczP (constructive criticism please , i worked hard on this and it’s my first game) Also anyone who makes YouTube videos, making a play through of this would really help thanks =3.
Doesn’t really have that, “abandoned” feel if you know what I mean?